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🔗 Linking words help structure your writing but should be used wisely.
🚫 Don’t use a linking word in every sentence. It sounds unnatural.
❌ Avoid repeating the same linking phrases over and over.
✅ Use the right linking word for the right purpose (contrast, example, addition, etc.).
🧠 Let your ideas flow naturally; don’t force connectors if your logic is clear.
You’ve probably heard that linking words (or cohesive devices) are essential for a high Coherence and Cohesion score in IELTS Writing Task 2. But here’s the truth: many people overuse, misuse, or repeat them. That can actually hurt your score.
In this blog post, I’ll show you how to use linking words in a natural, effective way so your body paragraphs flow smoothly and logically, just like a Band 7+ essay.
Why Linking Words Matter (But Only When Used Well)
Linking words are like road signs for your reader. They help the examiner follow your argument and see the connections between your sentences.
But there’s a catch: they are only useful when they help you make your arguments clearer.
So let’s break down the most common mistakes and what you should do instead.
Common Mistakes With Linking Words
🚫 Using Too Many Linking Words
“Firstly, public transport is useful. Moreover, it helps reduce traffic. Furthermore, it is eco-friendly. On the other hand, it may be not very convenient when unfamiliar.”
This sounds mechanical. Every sentence starts with a linking phrase, which feels unnatural.
🚫 Using Linking Words Incorrectly
“On the other hand, public transport reduces traffic.”
Unless you just mentioned an opposite idea, “on the other hand” doesn’t fit. Use contrast words only when you’re actually comparing.
🚫 Repeating the Same Linking Words
Using “furthermore” five times in one essay won’t impress the examiner. It shows limited vocabulary.
How to Use Linking Words Effectively
Think of linking words as supporting actors, not the star of the show. Your ideas and arguments should be centre stage.
Here are a few tips:
✅ Use Linking Words Only When They Help
You don’t need a connector in every sentence. Sometimes, a clear sentence structure is enough.
✅ Match the Link to the Logic
Use the right type of link for the right purpose:
Purpose | Examples |
---|---|
Adding Info | Also, In addition, Furthermore |
Contrasting | However, While, In contrast |
Explaining | This means that, As a result |
Giving Examples | For example, For instance |
✅ Vary Your Vocabulary
Try using different phrases that serve the same function. Instead of “For example,” you might write “One clear example is…”
✅ Let Sentences Flow Naturally
If your ideas are logically organized, you won’t need to force a linking word at the start of every sentence.
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Band 7 Paragraph: Smooth and Natural Linking
Let’s take a look at a Band 7-style paragraph that uses linking words effectively:
“Investing in public transportation is more effective at reducing traffic than. New roads might reduce traffic temporarily. However, over time, they often attract more vehicles and lead to even worse congestion. In contrast, public transport removes cars from the road by offering a more sustainable alternative, resolving the traffic issues for good. For instance, Singapore’s investment in mass transit has helped maintain smooth traffic despite rapid urban growth.”
Notice:
- Linking words are used only where needed
- No overuse or repetition
- The paragraph flows logically and naturally
Final Thoughts
Linking words should support your writing, not overwhelm it. Think of them as tools to guide your reader through your argument. Use them when they help and leave them out when your sentence is already clear.
If you want to see more Band 7+ paragraph examples and get feedback on your writing, check out our IELTS Writing Evaluations Bundles.
Less is more. Write clearly. Connect naturally.
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